Here’s a shorter version that sounds natural:
Hi! I’m moving to Melbourne for study and looking for a clean, friendly, and respectful home. I’m easy-going, tidy, and always clean up after myself. In my free time I enjoy going to the gym, exploring cafés and restaurants, and travelling. I respect everyone’s space but am always happy to have a chat. Looking for like-minded housemates who are considerate and easy to live with.