Here’s an improved version of your presentation:
Hello!
I’m a 30 year-old professional with a busy lifestyle. I work full-time, have a part-time job, and balance it all with my studies. I’m a non-smoker, with no pets or kids, and I’m looking for a clean and quiet room to rent.
Since I spend most of my time working and studying, I’m rarely home. When I am, I value a peaceful environment. I’m a responsible, tidy, and respectful tenant who takes good care of the space I live in.
A room with parking space for a car would be ideal, and I’m happy to discuss any house rules or requirements to ensure a good fit.
Looking forward to finding a comfortable place to call home! From January I prefer close to the City